This is a very short story - more or less. I don't think there's enough conflict for it to actually be categorized as a "short story," and I've been told that the ending sounds a bit too much like a punchline, but - don't tell anyone! - that's kind of the effect I was going for. :)
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WOW . . . just WOW!!!! I LOVED this . . . absolutely LOVED it! And I think it DOES qualify as a short story . . . even without alot of 'tension'. The characters were SO real . . . I loved all the banter between them . . . that was SO sisterly, between both the little ones AND the older ones.
And *I* LIKED your punchline ending . . . I LOVED this little family!!! =o)
I think I've seen this one before -it IS really good though =o)
I love the argument about whales being fish or mamals... all of your characters are very real. It's a good one to suck people in
This was really cute Sara. I hope you are able to publish a children's book, I think you could do a great job!
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